Poems by Georgia

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Re: Poems by Georgia

Postby pottertron » October 27th, 2015, 5:49 am

:D hi how do you come up with theses poems am in the middle of righting one about quditch it goes like this:

As I step on the pitch,
I see the snich,
Beauty be hold it as I stretch to hold it,

what do you think should go next so pleas can you help me
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Re: Poems by Georgia

Postby Little_Tee » October 29th, 2015, 6:50 am

Hey pottertron,

I'm not Georgia and sadly I don't know how she crafts such wonderful poems, but if you are just asking for general advice then I might be able to help :).

I personally use a rhyming dictionary and a thesaurus whenever I write poetry.

I really like what you have written so far and I would really like to see it when it's all finish.

Looking at what you have written so far I would recommend something like:
Beauty be hold it as I stretch to hold it,
Golden like the sun elusive to my attempt,

or

Golden like the sun elusive to all I admit,
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Re: Poems by Georgia

Postby pottertron » November 3rd, 2015, 12:32 pm

thanks a lot
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Re: Poems by Georgia

Postby Little_Tee » November 3rd, 2015, 1:13 pm

You're welcome :)

Good luck with writing.
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