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Alien's Stuff (Drawing's and Stories)

Postby Alien Iris » March 25th, 2017, 5:32 pm

Hey! figured I'd start a topic here. I write and draw a little and figured I'd share a few things. For now its just writing, i have to take pictures of things I have drawn.

I was looking through things to put on this topic and came across a thing called "hogwarts parodies whatever". I have no clue what I was thinking, and I have no clue when I wrote this, but it had to have been at least a year ago. To the tune of first time in forever.
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[Student:]
That car is flying, so's that chair
I didn't know they did that anyway
Who knew that I could float all of these plates?
For years I've been that strange new kid
Why should I care if you don’t fly?
Finally they're opening up the gate

There'll be actual real live wizards
It'll be totally strange
But wow, am I so ready for this change!

'Cause for the first time in forever
There'll be magic, there'll be joy
For the first time in forever
I'll be sleeping through the night

I don’t really know where I’m going
But I'm sure I’ll figure it out
'Cause for the first time in forever
I won't be alone

I can't wait to get sorted! [gasp]
What if I’m in... nothing?

Tonight imagine me robes and all
Precariously sitting on that stool
The picture of pure nervousness not grace
I suddenly hear the hats strong voice
Saying things that I don’t know about
Like” Your not in any house at all”


But then he’ll say he was joking,
And put me in Ravenclaw
Or some other house would be fine

For the first time in forever
I’m riding the Hogwarts Train
For the first time in forever
There’s some magic in my life

And I thought it was totally crazy
To dream I could do magic
But for the first time in forever
At least I've got a chance

[McGonagall:]
Go let them in, go let them see
Show them the beauty of the willow tree
Swish and flick, put on a show
Make one small move and everyone will see

[McGonagall:] That this world is beautiful
[Student:] This world is beautiful

[McGonagall:] It's agony to wait
[Student:] It's agony to wait

[McGonagall:] I think I’ll go and open up the gate
[Student:] The gate

[Student:] For the first time in forever
[McGonagall:] Go let them in, go let them see

[Student:] I'm seeing what I’ve dreamed of
[McGonagall:] Be the professor you always have to be

[Student:] A castle so majestic that

[McGonagall:] Look out

[Student:] It seems like it's true love
[McGonagall:] Look out, their here, go teach them how

[Student:]
I know it all will be here tomorrow,
So it doesn’t have to wait
'Cause for the first time in forever
For the first time in forever
Nothing's in my way!


Well now that that over with, have some halfway decent poetry (I hope)
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Decisions
Maybe I’m wrong
Maybe you're right
Maybe birds do fly in the night
Maybe the bat
Sleeps in mid flight
But I think you're wrong
And I think I’m right


Me, Myself, I
Maybe I’m
Different
Weird
Strange

And Maybe Your
Average
Normal
Simple

But People Need
Stories
Morals
Songs

So I’ll just stay
Me
Myself
I

Untitled Poems:

1.
Priceless
Outlawed
Won through pain
Entered by birth
Runs lives

2.
Have you ever been there when words come alive?
When they jump off the page to dance a jive?
When they fold themselves up into knives?
Have you ever been there when words come alive?


Here is the Legend of the Pencil Golems, explaining why there are no pencils at school.
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The Legend of the Pencil Golems

As the light dim in the hallways of the school, a mysterious sight can be seen
Sizes of cat like beasts slink inside, unseen
They all creep steadily down hallways, gathering in one mass
There, the Pencil Golems congregate at last

The Pencil Golems came after years of pencils gathering in hallways
One teacher decided to put a stop to it, as he was frustrated always
He was a science teacher, quite solemn
He turned the teachers into beasts known as the Pencil Golems
But things went wrong as the potion
Having failed its evil notion
Found its way into the into the clouds
It rained down at midnight, ore the crowds
Teachers began their transformation
Turned into tiger like beings with tails of pencil coloration
These spectral beasts leapt out their houses and gathered at the school
Where they were given their mission by the Greater Pencil Golems, not scattered
They gave orders to the one gathered
The Pencil Golems then bounded off through the school
Collecting pencils and giving them to the Lesser Pencil Golems, the fools
who delivered them to the Pencil Golems of Greater relations
The epidemic spread across the nation
Infecting all the teaching with the blight
Of the Pencil Golems, during the night

As the Pencil Golems Gather in the hallways of your school tonight
Keep your pencils and hold them tight
So as they try with all their might
Your pencil will not be stolen in spite

And that is why there are never pencils anywhere to be found
Anywhere, on the ground


And last and hopefully not least, my largest project to this date. I am rewriting my first finished "short" story. Its a fantasy-ish thing called "Were Am I?". Its about were-animals and such so if you don't like that kind of stuff, don't read. I'm not the best writer, but I try my best. This is just the first chapter and the beginning is rough and I'm working on it.

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Chapter One

Left. Right. Left again. Nicole’s feet beat the ground as one foot fell in front of the other in breakneck rhythm through the city's alleyways. She wasn’t quite sure why she was running, besides out of fear. She’d just revealed her biggest secret by accident to over one hundred people. Her fox form.

Nicole took deep breaths. No. This couldn’t be happening. But then it was. The shrinking of her body and the growth of her tail floating in the whirlwind of her transformation. What was left was a very startled fox and a screaming classroom. That's when she ran, shifting quickly into a t-shirt clothed girl.
{A/N:I have no idea how to refrase that and its awful, sorry]

Nicole was so caught up in her thoughts, she didn’t notice the girl behind her with the hammer until there were stars behind her eyelids and she was headed to the ground.



Nicole woke up bucked in the back seat of a minivan, which was slowly moving up and down, in sync with throbbing in her head. She shot up in her seat and hurriedly looked around. In the front of the van two girls sat. One was dark skinned with black hair pulled into two dual braids. The other had a bob of hair the color of a campfire and a smattering of freckles over her nose. The dark skinned girl sat in the driver's seat, tene and focused on the road. The other and had her feet kicked up on the dash and was flipping through radio stations. She glanced back and made eye contact with Nicole.

“Hey!” she said, waving back. Nicole yelped.

“Who are you people? Why am I here?” Her eyes flitted back and forth in the confined space

“Oh! Well thats rude of us isn’t it. I’m Red, this is Ali,” the red head pointed at the other, who waved, “We’re like you.”

“Like… Me?”



The white van pulled up to a blue house down a winding dirt road. A screech broke the silence. Doors slammed as the three girls got out of the vehicle. Chains rattled as the many locks on the door were opened one by one.

“Hey Boss Man we’re-” Red began to yell.

“Well this is less ‘creepy lair’ than I’d expected, but it smells like a bunch of animals live here.” Nicole commented.

“Well, in a way…”

Three girls then entered into another room, Nicole pinned between the other two. In a chair near the fire sat an important looking man. He looked around his thirties, with graying hair. He cleared his throat.

“Red, can you explain our world and then send her to me?” he said, before turning and walking out of the room, Ali trailing behind him a bit, leaving Red and Nicole alone.

Red sighed and began.

“Welcome the the crazy world of were’s. Were's are what most people seem to think are confined to wolves, such as myself, but are actually many types of animals. For example, Ali’s a hawk, and I believe you're a fox. Right?” Nicole began to answer. “Right.” Red interrupted. Nicole scowled.

“Now clans are what we are organised in. It’s like a pack of wolves, but more animals. Waaaayyy more animals. There are rankings in clans, though not as many, just Alpha and Beta. Our clans Alpha is Dominic, and our Beta is Ali. Because she's so much better than the rest of us…” she muttered the last line in an undertone before continuing, “Now Alpha’s have special powers to help them keep control over their clans. Those powers are heightened senses, freeze, and force change, all which, fortunately, only work on strays, that's you,” she pointed at Nicole, “and members of their clan, that's me.” She pointed at herself.

“But what do they do?”

“Hush I’m getting to that. Heightened senses are just that, heightened senses. Freeze is the ability to stop a person in their tracks for any given amount of time. Finally, Force change makes Alphas able to influence the changes to and from our were forms. Questions?”

“My heads spinning but I think so.”

“Ok good. Now I’m going to take you to Dominic's office for his usual ‘interrogation’. Don’t worry he’s just a big kitty cat.”

Little did Nicole know just how literal that was.
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Re: Alien's Stuff (Drawing's and Stories)

Postby Hermione Leviosa » April 8th, 2017, 9:18 pm

This is great Iris. I look forward to seeing more from you.
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Re: Alien's Stuff (Drawing's and Stories)

Postby Alien Iris » April 9th, 2017, 8:30 pm

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This is a drawing of the Marauders plus my OC and my two other HP friends Mary Sue's OC's. Long story short, Sirius and one OC convinced James that showing off would attract Lily, my OC is telling him its a bad idea, and Remus and other OC are just confused.
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Re: Alien's Stuff (Drawing's and Stories)

Postby Hermione Leviosa » April 10th, 2017, 4:23 pm

That is great work Iris! :) You captured the expressions really well. I hope you post more.
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Re: Alien's Stuff (Drawing's and Stories)

Postby Seltzer » May 29th, 2017, 2:08 pm

Great read Iris. Looking forward to reading more from you.


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